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「高考提示作文」65 A Special Summer Camp
Unit 65 A Special Summer Camp
你与几名同学参加了一次夏令营，因为几名英籍营员的加入使得本次活动与以往不同。他们是来自伦敦以东，位于泰晤市河畔的Canvey市的高中生。中、英方营员通过此次活动均有较大收获。
请根据上面情景以下面表格中的提示写一篇短文。要求100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
活动内容 | 收获 | |
中方营员 | 带英方营员游览故宫、颐和园、长城等景地，并介绍近年来北京的变化 | 结识了新朋友，英语口语在实践中有了提高 |
英方营员 | 游览之余向中方营员介绍英国学生的日常生活和学习情况，并在英语学习方面帮助中方营员 | 认识到北京与他们原来所听说的大不一样，北京与他们所居住的Canvey市一样美丽 |
During the holiday , I joined in a special summer camp with my classmates .There we made some new friends who
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“范文”
During the holiday , I joined in ① a special summer camp ②with my classmates .There we made some new friends who were senior school students from Canvey, a town on the Thames , which is to the east of London.
As hosts③ , we showed them around many places of interest④ in Beiging ,such as the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace and told them about the changes taking place⑤ in Beijing. They said that Beijing is quite different from⑥ what they had heard of and it was as beautiful as Canvey. Meanwhile,⑦ they told us about the daily life and study of American students and did their best to help us with our English. With the help of them we improved our spoken English⑧ .I think the summer camp is of great value ⑨
“注释：”
①join in : 参加活动,相当于take part in
②summer camp:夏令营
③host:n 东道主，主人
④places of interest :名胜
⑤take place : 发生
⑥be different from : 不同于
⑦meanwhile:adv 同时
⑧with the help of: 在……的帮助下
⑨be of great value: 很有价值，等于be very valuable
“点评：”
本文是根据表格内容提示展开的说明文。
随着对外交流的日益增多，中学生直接与外国朋友交往已成了现实，本文作者就与来自美国的同龄人一起参加了这次夏令营。作者按照表格内容提示合理地安排了文章结构，把双方营员的活动内容及收获做了分述，采用ＡＢＡＢ式，层次分明，令人一目了然。从整篇文章可以看出，作者精心组织了语言，能使用一些比较复杂的句子表达思想，词汇丰富，语言准确。
资料来源：英语作文高分必背丛书：高考/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005
